RE:Need company to produce betterI should add that some would say that some messaging is better than the vacuum we have had. I agree.
Marketing tip: Have someone read out loud what was written. Depending on the importance of the message being delivered, this should be read audibly to more than one person. Do this and you will hopefully catch things that are just not flowing, etc (They use 'PROPRIETARY' twice in one sentance!)
Sorry it may sound nit-picking, but I have been very patient on this holding of mine, and DO want them to get it right!
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