Only a Pie in the SkyPom pom holder like Sparta can take that presentation and think anything positive...no rev, no actual prpjections and another pivot to selling a finished product versus the parts for the product. Now if you were not successful and selling your 'parts' how on earth can someone take you seriously when you now say you are selling the 'finished product'. Here's an idea...sell the parts, generate revenue so you dont have to beg the market for finacing...then pivot to selling the finished product. Crawl, walk, run...in that order as if you are attempting to just stand up and run you will (and have) fall flat on your face