RE: Sonomax success will be told over the next 6 m Primed;
Iceman was quite polite in his assesment of your writing. It is far worse than he suggests. I am not sure why you post your drivel here without vetting it first. Think about your motives please, just like I am thinking how to not be too critical of your primary school style. You might want to change your pen name to Syd Lexic. Are you sure you're not WDR2? Yikes...maybe once a critic always a critic...sorry.
Insofar as a critique on your writing...it seems as if that's what you were asking for...you have made a number of syntax and spelling errors.
As well, your argument and its premises have zero credibility, that means no support written in your piece to support them.
I've offered to edit your work prior to its release before. The offer stands, but as a new writer you must take greater responsibility for your postings.
Now, related to your opinions and your expectations that you clearly outline, they are simply that. Savvier investors and even speculators wouldn't be swayed by your hype. I realize however that is probably not who you are trying to convince.
As all of us hacks say...but you did not...this is IMHO.